80 ( +1 | -1 ) Aspecial thanks to ----------EVERYONE WITH THIS LITTLE POEM .HOPE YOU ENJOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!About chess my dad says Im way too happy!!!But what does he know, he's only my old pappy!!!Now when it comes to chess, this site has a great bunch of guys!!!Ask they will tell you the HOW,WHEN ,WHERE and even the WHYS!!Yes i'm in love with the royal game !!!But what do you expect I'm a very blonde dame!!All you guys gave me the confidence to overcome my fears!!!If only you were here you'd see my tears!!!So I thank you one and all!!!Writing for you guys has really been a ball!!!Let anyone ask me and I would do it again!!!Because everyone here has been a very good friend!!!Now all you guys know who you are!!!Thanks to your kindness I just may go far!!!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, thanks your friend til the end !!!! ,,,,,, if you enjoyed say SO if not say so too,,, a special code SBWAK!!!!!!! YOUR BLUEBABYGIRL
29 ( +1 | -1 ) I thinkwhat your Dad means is that being deep in concentration and having a smile on your face aren't usually two things that happen simultaneously - unless you've just spotted a forced mating sequence!! Keep up your writing - and your youthful honesty!
52 ( +1 | -1 ) Kind wonderful words in a poem!Good job on your poem of thanks. Your poem not only shows your gratitude for those who have treated you with kindness, but also restates in a resounding loud voice how much character you have. I look forward to reading the future debates and discussions that you initiate and often sustain. As long as you keep up your curiosity and fervor for knowledge, that thirst will guide you through wherever your life might take you.
51 ( +1 | -1 ) bluebabygirl;Have you ever read any of Tolkien or George Macdonalds works? if you haven't, it might be a good idea to read some of their poetry, especially George Macdonald. you'll find it pretty easy reading, and you will probably learn to write poetry even better. Rythm, and maybe beauty of phrase I think are things a little lacking, though your doing very well! Keep it up!
No offense, just a little constructive criticism. Hope to see more, Tulkos.
102 ( +1 | -1 ) to tulkosno offense taken . as a matter of fact your criticism, seems to be very good advice !!!!! I must plead the lateness of hour when i wrote these and trying to make sure my dad didn't wake up , catch me up and really get me!! SUCH DISTRACTIONS MADE IT VERY HARD TO CONCENTRATE!! but i will next time somebody asks post one that i have not written in haste . I look forward to you appraisel of that one too!! I thank you very much for taking the time and effort to give me such good advice!!!Many players on here have been very courteus and kind to me , also giving me the courage to place my effforts out to be seen and I hope enjoyed!!OF WHICH I CONSIDER YOU TO BE ONE!!!!! I have recieved several dozen messages from kind people expressing thier enjoyment of my small efforts and thats given me great happiness!!I will look up those books you referred!!!!!!!!Avery great thanks to you again,,,,, your hope to be friend the bluebabygirl
25 ( +1 | -1 ) I think the poetry is wonderful!! , I've enjoyed reading it very much. Its quite a pleasant surprise that I've never encountered in the world of chess before... Please keep at it along with all of your other posts and threads.
115 ( +1 | -1 ) to allagain i am humbled by the generosity and kindness of the wonderful people on this site /. other sites have held no special appeal to me because they were not at all like you guys !!!! of course i play chess on 4 other sites and that keeps me very very busy but im concentrating on this one now. i find myself taking less and less expeditionary forays to those other sites !! of course i shall be glad to KEEP IT UP , so long as you guys get pleasure and enjoyment out of reading them!!!!Ihave a great many threads to post for future , some are QUITE INTERESTING TOO !! However I wanted to be sure that my little efforts to entertain and gain knowledge did not offend or (BORE ANY ONE) THANKS FOR YOUR WORDS THEY ARE A REAL COMFORT TO A WANT TO BE WRITER !! i simply cannot properly express my gratitude in words to all you guys !!!I SAW ,I CAME BUT YOU GUYS CONQUERED MY HEART !!! ,,,,,,,,,,,,,she let out a great cry of anguish that flowed with her tears!!!!!For the love of those people had conquered all her fears !!!!,,, sorry it just came to me , i could not stop the flow of thoughts , they overwhelm me at times !!I MUST GO BEFORE MY HEART MELTS ,,,, BBG
51 ( +1 | -1 ) Yes you are correctthis site has many intelligent, witty, interesting and knowledgeable people who clearly outnumber the troublemakers. Rubbing shoulders with them is an invaluable experience. These are all decent people who would never allow a 15 year old girl, who is brave enough to bare her soul and wear her heart on her sleeve, to have her feelings trampled. In other words your freedom of expression is assured. So go for it!! (but don't let this get in the way of your school work - you future quality of life might depend on that!)
79 ( +1 | -1 ) Aspecial thanks to-----, part 2writing a poem, me? I even dont know how! I never walked this way, until now! the ways in life are strange, I would like to know anything about the things, it will bring to me before, I will know about it more! but this in vain, nobody can show me a future moment on my way. so beautiful it is when it comes this day! a day, that shows me this wonderful moment on my way. It talks to me, some called it desteny. what I can say is that this way crazy, but it talkes to me again like: Dont be lazy! why? there is a message with a special thanks that has to be send, for this moment when came to me this wonderful friend! But now I have to come to an end with my modest attempt to make it possible that this thanks goes the way to my friend!
47 ( +1 | -1 ) to gothicgirlI am very grateful for your poem it is a great honor for me that you took time to create such a good one too!!! As you told me it was your very first time to attempt to do so , i am most honored !! to raimon , bigt255, tulkos, tovmauzer, and crayons I would simply say you guys are more than just nice , you are perfect gentlemen!!! and also seem to be very wise too !!! thanks ever so much !!! ## SBWAK yours bluebabygirl p.s. now finally I sleep zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz